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  1. Panel 1:
    <Oh!! I'm sorry, excuse me!>
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  2. Panel 2:
    <Not to 'bully' you, but there's some restocking we need to do.>
    <Uh, OK, sure.>
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  3. Panel 3:
    <Piro-san, you dropped these...>
    <Ah! My signed sketch! What did I... Oh! That's right, I put it on the shelf here.>
  4. Panel 4:
    <Oh no! I... I forgot to thank her again for this when she left!>
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  5. Panel 5:
    <How could I forget that? Idiot, idiot!>
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  6. Panel 6:
    <Piro-san, do you like Nanasawa-san?>
  7. Panel 7:
    <I didn't see you down there! Uhm... sir? Are you... OK? Sir? Uh, OK, I'll just... be on my way then!>
    <this is kobayashi. injuries sustained but proceeding with mission.>


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< Piro >

yet another saeko sketch...


Thursday - November 20, 2003

[Piro] - 12:24:00 - [link here]

As i've said before, the hardest part of doing Megatokyo is the writing. People ask me all the time how far in advance I have Megatokyo planned out. The answer is yes and no. Do i know generally where Megatokyo is going? Yes. Do i have a word document that has the next 20 comics scripted out, complete with comments, scene descriptions and comic layouts?

Hah, right. Excuse me while i laugh myself silly.

If you must know, I'd LOVE to have such a document, but the sad truth is that it will probably never exist, not the way I work. Writing a story is a lot like focusing in on a picture. You start with a general idea of what the story is, where it is going and the general concepts you are trying to get across. After this, there are several degrees of 'focusing in'. You get more detailed about what happens within the story, adding more levels of details as you connect the dots and weave the threads together. This is all a nebulous process - it's a lot like pulling things out of thin air and trying to make something solid. It can be very frustrating sometimes.

The final step is actually one of the most unpredictable: pulling together the specifics of what actually happens in the story. You have to pull the actual moments into sharp focus - The scenes, the events, what the characters say, etc. I think if i were any sort of professional comic writer and artist, I'd finish this part of the comic writing process before i started drawing the actual comic itself. This is actually pretty rare. I usually have a vague idea of what the comic is going to be, a few scribbles on paper, some loose setup in my head, and then i start drawing.

The nice thing about this approach is that it lets the dialogue and the art bounce off of each other, and i can take advantage of the flexibility to make an ok comic better on the fly. There is an ad lib quality to it that i'm not really sure how to match in a development phase without drawing the final frames. I've been doing MT this way since it started but I keep saying to myself i have to change, start writing ahead further, finalizing strips sooner, doing more development at this last 'focusing in' level... It's a lot harder than it sounds.

When i started working on 'warmth' last year - trying to take it from that nebulous idea phase to the production of actual, real, panels for it - I learned something about the comic creation process. With MT, each page stands more or less on its own, and the story stumbles along one page at a time. I bring each page into focus one at a time, and following pages are in many ways solidified by what happens in the page before it. With 'warmth', i was trying to pull together 15-30 pages of material all at once. What startled me was how hard it was for me to do this. I found myself not able to move very far forward without actually finishing bits and pieces of the comic first.

That's why the initial release of 'warmth' wasn't very good. The first 3 pages, then the three after that, came out really well. The remaining pages fell apart and I ended up cutting it short because, well... i felt stuck, and that things weren't coming together quite right. Sobering, really, to see a concept you are so keen for not living up to your expectations.

Since that time, i've been able to step away from that first bungled attempt to bring 'warmth' to life, and i've had a chance to rethink some things. There were vast gray areas in the story that needed resolution, stretches of flatness that was devoid of the kind of character and life that it should have had. It doesn't matter how strong a story feels to you, if the mechanics that hold it together are, well, mechanical and lifeless, then the story is not going to communicate well to others. Thankfully, i'm pretty thick headed about not drawing things that i don't have a feel for. In recent months I've spent a lot of spare time trying to reduce the mechanical structures holding the story up and replace them with living structures - giving the story the soul it's supposed to have..

Much of what i've been experimenting with can be applied to Megatokyo as well. While its bit-by-bit nature makes it easier to create comics with ad lib life to it, I do think that getting deeper into the story development process for MT will only improve things. Honestly, Chapter 4 isn't bad, but there are a lot of things wrong with it. There are so many story threads that they are overpowering the little segways that can add spice and humor to it. Hopefully i can do a better job with the next chapter. We'll see.

Originally, i was going to cut back on convention appearances and other travel next year to give myself more time to work on things like development, but... well... things didn't work out that way. ^^;; From the look of things, it's going to be another busy year of traveling, and it starts with a bang for me - thanks to the good folks at Anime Expo Tokyo, i'll be visiting Japan this January. :)

It's been nine years since my initial visit to the place where all of my stories seem to take place, and i'm looking forward to having a chance to recharge a bit of that inspiration that helped form them. Anime Expo Tokyo is a con where they are attempting to combine the best elements of American and Japanese style conventions into one, and they have invited me as an American guest. Anime Expo Tokyo takes place this January 16-18, 2004 at the Sunshine City Convention center in Ikebukuro, Tokyo, Japan. There are quite a few Japanese guests, from Kikuko Inoue (Beldandy in AMG, etc) to Akamatsu Ken (Love Hina) and many others (a full list is on the website). I know that there are some MT readers in Japan - not as many as here, but it should be fun. One thing they really hope to do is attract fans from outside of Japan, and the con is set up to take care of english speaking fans, and I very much welcome the universality of the fandom that surrounds the things we like. [oops, seems like its too late for the travel packages ^^;; - piro] Its worth checking out if you feel like doing something crazy like, fly to japan on a whim... wait, where have i heard that before...

I've also managed to set up and start to organize the rest of my convention / travel schedule for the year. Don't fret if you can't fly out to Japan to see me at AX Tokyo, Seraphim and I ended up planning to travel as much, if not more, than we did last year. ^^;; Here are some of the conventions that we are confirmed for, so you can plan ahead a little if one is in your area:

- Katsucon - Crystal City, Virginia - Feb 13-15, 2004
- Megacon - Orlando, Florida - March 5-7, 2004
- Sakuracon - Seattle, WA - April 23-25, 2004

There are more, but for now that's what's been confirmed. It's looking like I might be going to Anime Central, Fanime, A-kon, San Diego Comic Con, Otakon, and a few others this year. Ugh. I think i need my head examined...

Quick notes to be added here - be sure to read Seraphim's recent rant where it talks about Operation Comix Releif if you haven't yet - its a good cause.

< Dom >

Games that rule lives...


Thursday - November 20, 2003

[Dom] - 23:00:00 - [link here]

A note to MegaTokyo fans who're pen 'n' paper gamers: due to Dunjin Master's intervention, I'm currently statting up major MegaTokyo characters using the SpyCraft system. While they're by no means official RPG stats, they're my take on how to turn the guys into D20 characters. Check out the ENworld thread here. I've currently completed statting up Piro (why people would want to play as him is beyond me), Junpei and Dom, with Ed and Largo coming soon

So I've gotten back into a gaming groove, which is nice, all things considered. Things could be much worse. But what's interesting is how vastly different the games I'm playing are.

See, on the one hand I'm playing Phantasy Star Generation:1, which is Sega's PS2 remake of their Master System classic. I'm loving it, mostly because--bless Sega for this--they finally instituted an auto-map feature for the dungeons, which makes the game much more palatable than it was on the Master System. The difficulty seems to have been lowered a bit, but I don't care--I'm basking in the nostalgia and keeping Final Fantasy X-2 away from the TV while I'm at it.

But at the same time, I'm playing Da Capo ~Plus Situation~, a visual novel with an emphasis on the "novel". As opposed to the amount of control you have over your characters in any standard RPG, Da Capo reminds me of the second disc of Xenogears in that it's a festival of hitting "confirm". But for some reason, I don't mind it as much as I minded Xenogears--perhaps because I came into the "game" knowing that I was going to be reading a story rather than trying to play an RPG, and without the 30 hours of playing an RPG before settling into "press confirm" mode, I was much more used to the idea. It doesn't hurt that Da Capo's text scrolls by about 30 times faster than Xenogears' slow crawl, and that the Japanese language is much more compact than English. But the fact remains--it's funny how I turn my fingers off when I'm playing this visual novel, and then I go right out and start planning RPG turns.

Maybe I'm just turning my mind off when I play Da Capo--but that's not it, really, since my Japanese isn't good enough that I can process it on the subconscious level. Maybe it's just that I find the pink bear outrageously funny, especially given how many drugs the scenario writers had to have taken to come up with her. Maybe I'm just finding a relatively brainless way to take a break from nonstop RPGs when SportsCenter isn't on... but it's still an odd mix of games I'm playing right now.

Oh. One last thing. It amuses me that some readers who read the rants still don't know that I went to Cal. So here's proof, with a small time remaining before the next Big Game: Go Bears! Beat Stanfurd!


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